After 7:00 am.

After 7:00 am.

A Poem by panic suicide XD
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a short, brief poem of the morning after seven am.

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After seven in the morn
the sky starts to warn us
of something more than 
ourselves.

The wind whips and blows
strong like a hurricane
unable to slow down for
anyone.

If anyone knows how to
cope with depression
dont be pressing my
already worn buttons.

A nervous wreck having
to cope all alone and
my head explodes.

Heavy and scary the wind
presses me up against the 
wall, unaware of what 
tomorrow holds.

© 2010 panic suicide XD


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Very well put together and beautifully written. Great job!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


For Ouciano: Thanks for the information and It was just a spare of moment thing. Did not put much thought into it. I threw it together.. Ive always been like that.
For The Warrior Poet: Yes, and the windy morning reminded me of the inner turmoil..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well, a mental tempest...

So which came first? Did the inner turmoil seem like a storm that morning or did the windy morning remind you of the inner turmoil

Posted 13 Years Ago


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For 15 years old this is a good work
But in general it lacks of some ... passion
But I like it though
PEACE

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 23, 2010
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panic suicide XD
panic suicide XD

Manila, AR



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during the day im taylor and at night i turn into a member of the undead! some say im strange thats why i dont have many friend but the ones i do have understand me! :) i love to read, write, and act/.. more..