The Midnight Sun Knows All

The midnight sun whispers

A faint golden glow

Across the parking lot,

Across the melted snow.

The midnight sun carries

An empty cool breeze.

The chill attacks.

I fall down to my knees.

The cracking of the parking lot

Shoots pain up my spine.

The heart is torn out,

The heart that once was mine.

The midnight sun watches,

Beaming malicious power.

I crawl to the edge

And my body falls from the tower.

This scene was not of murder,

As the midnight sun surely knows.

It was my own free will,

Like my blood that freely flows.

Author's Note

I really liked this. :p Leave reviews please :)

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I really like this too :D

[Lawrence Parlier]

Strong imagery. Nice job

[Chris]

Strong and a sense of presence.

[shunik]

yeah you're right

[Bidu Ibrahim]

Powerful imagery Ki! Good job.

[♋ Iris ♋]

Amazing, I love it~!

[Reaper]

great imagery, and well written. i really joy reading this. well done

[Daenerys]

This is very good, except in some stanzas you tell what's happening. Try showing instead of telling. The poem flows really well together and I love your descriptions. :) You're an amazing writer and I enjoy reading your works.

[Sunflower]

i love this so much, very very excellent write Ki

[quarintine_deathangel]

It has excellent timing to it and the imagery is clear, very good :)