Rain! Thunder! Lightning!

just a silly little poem :P

The rain. . .

         Pitter Patters .

    .              Against my window . .

                           Slowly slides down .

                                    Gladly making room .

                .                             For more raindrops .

                 Their friends join in    .

                          The everlasting race     . .

    .                                                  Lightning strikes .

        The crisp cool air         . .

                  .                  So bright against   . .

 .                          The night sky .

                                    And thunder .

                  .                           Joins in the fun                                     . .

                 A unique way .

                          Of expressing .

     .                                                                   Anger and  .

       Sorrow and .

                Even fury . .

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I Love the zig-zagging unless your computer was having seizures!! lol Very cool. Whether it be rain tracing across your window while you have that nose of yours pressed against the pane as you watch it fall and zig zag past your eyes from side to side or looking PAST the window to catch a lightning storm, the form is beautiful. Your enthusiasm for making your poem stand out and perform for me is awesome to see... "thunder joins in the fun"..... My goodness I Love that!! I Love the Summer rain at about 2 in the morning. I can't get anyone to do it with me anymore, but going for a walk in my bare feet in the rain at night is sorely missed. : ) I pretended I went on this walk with you because you write like friends that were close to me, used to talk to me before they died or moved away. I really enjoyed this!! I almost wrote "*cuddles*" These are the kind of poems "yours" that I will be happy to come across when I need that lonely feeling to be rid of. *Big Hugzz* xoxox -Mark

[Kiara]

Um thank you Emily. It looked even better when it was how I actually wanted it to look like ;D

[Daenerys]

I love the set up of this :)

[Kiara]

the format keeps getting messed up. it's supposed to be a lightning bolt :(