Snow Angel

            I trudge through the snow, footfalls hushed by the white cloud.  Wind collides with my face, hot but cold.  My hair blinds me while revealing ears that have already gone ice cold.  My smile grows despite the abuse of the wind and I lie down in the snow.  I squint at the too bright sky as I move my arms and legs, creating a skirt and wings.  I hop to my feet, eager to check my work and get away from the cold clawing through my clothes.  Again, I smile despite the cold.

Reviews

[Skai Rain]

ReadSwop: Beautiful start. I personally would suggest putting all of the paragraphs together and uploading them together as a chapter since it is easier to follow and hook readers. However, that it up to you. Unless I am misunderstanding what you're trying to do... in the end you should write it however your heart desires. You can obviously see your talent either way.

[New Theory]

Indeed a good imagery of a snow angel.

[A. Amos]

I agree with My fellow reviewer..

[Carl Drake Barnard]

I like the concept that you created here :) A lovely piece with a vivid picture of a Snow angel :) super cool :)