5 Wishes for a Wishing Well

This was written a while ago for a boy I had a major crush on. That boy is now my love. Zach, this is for you.

They say that a wish is worth a penny.

If that were the case, then I'd buy many.

I flick my wrist and the penny falls.

Into the darkness, the Wishing Well calls.

 

For my first wish, I wish for your gaze,

Eyes that break through the hormone haze.

 

My second wish, I wish for your voice,

I'd listen forever if it were my choice.

 

Third to come, I wish for your touch,

To be in your arms, I'd love so much.

 

For the fourth, I wish for your lips,

A kiss so sweet my heart surely skips.

 

Number five, the final fall.

One last penny, please hear my call.

I wish for you, your love and devotion.

The perfect sin, the perfect emotion.

Dear Wishing Well, I wish it forever,

Grant me this wish, I'll wish again never.

Reviews

[Nothing Personal]

I liked that it rhymed. And its a nice little poem, innocent and sweet. Good work

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Your words are smooth and elegant.
Nice Work.

[Deepshikha]

This is so sweet and simple. Very light, very fluid. I like it.