Stolen Reality

A poem about how false realtiy is

Reality's been stolen

Nothing seems real,

we're living in a fantasy,

That's bizzarely surreal.

 

Everything seems broken,

lost and confused.

When lies rule the people

which of them is true.

 

I'm not sure what to think

of this world around me

I know it needs help,

but where to start

 

I wish I could say,

that I know what to do,

But it would taste a lie

to say that I do.

 

Will somebody help me?

Make this world a better place? 

Will someone stand by me?

When I rebel against those who control?

 

If we joined together,

maybe we could break this false reality.

If someone would help me,

the world will be a better place.

 

We will break the reality,

that people say are true,

lets make our own reality,

just me and you.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sands]

"let's do this thing!" i'm all for it and will gladly take front line by your side babe. let's break free those who are stuck on "fantasy", we need to bring people back to earth and to reality...

[fallen angel]

nice job on this. It was well expressed and true to what you have written about the world around us.

[Magdelena]

WOW! Loved this.. I often wondered if it was just me, or were their others, that saw so much in this world that was more fantasy than reality.. You captured so many images inside your words that it dragged me in and made me think back to all my old thoughts. Great piece!





Peace;
Magdelena