Who She Use To Be

This describes what I was going through and how i felt a few years back.

She so distant now 

Stuck in a world with no one to trust

Can't believe anything you say

Cause everything has been a lie

Nothing will ever change

It will always be the same

What do you have to say for yourself 

Now you've seen the blood drip down

Do you like what you see

Do you like who you've made her to be

Cause what once was so beautiful 

Is all scared up now

As she cuts herself again

To take the pain away 

But who gonna come to rescue her

Before it's to late 

I hope your happy 

Is this what you wanted 

To see her life go crumbling down

To see her with nothing

So she run back to you 

And play your stupid games 

Well it's gonna end today

 

Taylee

Reviews

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Wow from beautiful to torn and broken with hurt:( Thank you for sharing Taylee:)

[Taylee]

Thank you guys (:

[Heather Anne]

Good write! It's very honest and open.

[zainul]

This is a great write.

[Zap-the-awesome]

It's creepy at the end and seems from the heart of an angry friend.
Not very original, however. Nevertheless, good work! I hope to see more

[Emrick]

Sad. Everybody at least once in there life time have to go through pain. Pain makes the strong stronger and the weak weaker.This is the world of the able ones,only the strong survives.