The Way She Sings (By my 8 year old sister)

Amari wrote another poem and this time she wants feedback and ratings from everyone and she said put #Love at the end of your comments if you're a fan

Its the way she sings 

She sings like an angel 

When she sing I feel a chill run down my spine

When she sing it speaks to me 

Her words make me safe

Her notes are perfect 

She makes no mistakes 

She's flawless

Just like Beyonce

If you listen closely 

You can hear the two words she say 

"I care"

That's all I needed to hear

Reviews

[Captain Rilen]

A lovely dedication to her sister. Let her know that she's quite the talented writer for a young girl. :D
#love

[Emily]

Your did a vary good job!
Does she have account on here?

[Tayauna Hargrove]

No she just post on my account

[Tayauna Hargrove]

Amari wrote another poem and this time she wants feedback and ratings from everyone and she said put #Love at the end of your comments if you're a fan

[Bare trees]

This is an excellent job from someone who sounds like a poet. Keep writing.