My old shoes

My old shoes

A Poem by Tauvic Heedajat

Oh my old shoes 
You always reminds me my past
Although now you've been covered with dust
Yet your vestiges will always escort my great days
Oh my old shoes
You always protect sole of my foot from gravel
Although you ain't the shoe I choose
Yet your stories will always  accompany my great travels
Oh my old shoes
You always follow me in every scene
Although your leather has been bitten by mouse
Yet your shoelace will always tie our reminiscence

© 2015 Tauvic Heedajat


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I do understand the poem. The appearance of someone's shoes. Can tell a tale of their life.
"Oh my old shoes
You always follow me in every scene
Although your leather has been bitten by mouse
Yet your shoelace will always tie our reminiscence"
The above lines are true. Reminiscence is a good place to end on some days. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Walk a mile in someone else's shoes that saying goes, meaning to see the pain and strife of their life. But this poem walks a different road, it truly sees the soul of the wearer, their accomplishments and love of life. Bravo!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tauvic Heedajat

9 Years Ago

Thank you Bear for reviewing my poem. It is great.
I do understand the poem. The appearance of someone's shoes. Can tell a tale of their life.
"Oh my old shoes
You always follow me in every scene
Although your leather has been bitten by mouse
Yet your shoelace will always tie our reminiscence"
The above lines are true. Reminiscence is a good place to end on some days. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 27, 2015
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Tauvic Heedajat
Tauvic Heedajat

DKI Jakarta, Indonesia



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