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thats how it is

Some people are so beautiful to see all wild

yet so painful to leave free,

knowing that at some point they will wind up

... in captivity.

Reviews

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

yes. that is precisely how it is

but you know.. you are one of those, though i happen to think you are a wonderfully wild thing who desires not to be owned, but to be loved for the wildness

it is possible, you know, to find the one who doesn't want to gentle you, merely tangle their fingers in your windknotted tresses

(my look at me waxing all poetic up in your poetry. i think it's because i miss your softly quirky smile round my world)

[Isolophobe]

Ahhh, I've only a sigh in response to this truth. Magnificent.

[fireblossom]

I like this with much feeling.

[Alicante lullaby]

so less words,each a world,,,,universe,truth in three and a half lines,

[Emily B]

it really wants a name

and deserves one :)

[Michael X]

makes perfect sense, like as in most people are born wild and become slaves to their own captivity. i like the short, powerful descriptive, ambitious, lighthearted, whisping feeeling that funnels into an insight 100/100

[Gandré]

In the city's lightless lanes, life was looking for your prop. Loved.

[Alz Alz]

This short poem could have so many other meanings... I'm going to need some time to think about this one :) excellent poem though, i really like it.