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A Poem by Taunt-gently

All the paper pieces we'll pulp down till then

that time; then

with all the writings fluid we’ll add petals

we’ll add petals, colour dye and a silk window

were we can press out firmer sheets to lay between.  

© 2010 Taunt-gently


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Title - Paper Presses

lol - you hate titles so I taunted you gently.

Posted 14 Years Ago




I like this poem. It made me write - time presses on to virgin sheets naked to all

Posted 14 Years Ago


Why didn't you extend your hands ...to get close and intimate?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it seems so simplistic a write, but there is a hidden intriguing emotion behind it that i can't quite pin down.. beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago



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A Poem by Taunt-gently


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