[untitled]

 

    That moment felt beautiful

    like I might have been beautiful

    but you know how it is,

    time moves on full of knowing

    beauty fades with time;

    not like heart stains

    bleeding bloody love strains.

 

   

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Sara

[fireblossom]

I don't like to put titles on my poems. Titles force them onto one road of thousands. I put titles so I can find them on my hard drive. :-)

Very nice poem here. Flowing words of truth.

[Kelley]

This was beautiful in a heartbreaking way.
Why do your poems not have a title? Just
wondering.
Kelley