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Sometimes I think you hear me cry; it’s foolish,

I know you’re just standing in the rain, I hear it.

Reviews

[Isolophobe]

The epitome of concise and emotive. It also paints a picture without too many words, which is quite impressive.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

hmm there is a lot to this image.. just as intense and distilled down to its essence as haiku - and yet.. shorter even.
there are different ways my mind takes this, new scenarios i imagine every time i read it -

that is a hallmark of a powerful write!