Fair Trade

 

Earnest heart that trembles n aches to be set free,
rejoice in harping song n ring to heavens nothing of whispers;
but true proclamations high,

hear echoes back in foreign voice,
loud and sweet and wanted, pulled like breath to breast, and
rest in eternal comfort of unbound discoveries never lost again.

for

to watch you reach heavens shore, I would leave you ever more,

for you to take deserved lovers arms, i’d let my heart fall to harms

for ways of savoured delight dear renaissance,

for me to see you smile would be fair trade.  

Reviews

[theperfectfit]

"breath to breasts" & "heart fall to harms"'
I liked your subtle use of alliteration here.
It's beautiful.
Well done! :)

[Michael X]

You did a really nice job with this poem in meaning, sincerity and content, the wording struck me like Poe
in flow, particularly the reciprocating lines, great job, speaks to the heart