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Who would dare think

That in the midst of it all

There might be reality

In friendship,  honesty,

Honestly its been the death of me,

Daring to believe.

I’d just like to say thank you

Friends, you all taught me

What faith really is,

Its a bogie man under my bed

And thats all it was all along

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

a warrior never surrenders

[Michael X]

excellent job, the natural rhythm and flow have lyrical qulity of a heartsong, powerful and subtle,
I'm sure many people can relate to the depthfully charged meaning expressed with utter sincerity
a pleasure to read, thanks for sharing your talent

[J.Black]

This is really a sad heart filled poem.... it lingers my friend.

[♡Moon Child♡..]

That is such a...depressing poem...makes me think of how fake the world can be...wow...