A Man Misunderstood

To someone I wish I could be with right now.

He is not the way he seems 
Just some mcdreamy dream 
He is a human being a living thing 
And that's okay by me 

The comments and the likes 
Sometimes must feel like spikes 
They only see his image 
Not the mountain that he hikes 

He is flesh and he is bone 

Yet they've turned him into stone 

He doesn't deserve the cards he's dealt 

And he shouldn't be alone 

If I could hold you know I would 

All I see in you is good 

I'm a woman who understands 

That you're a man misunderstood 

Reviews

[emipoemi]

The first two lines paint a different picture than what the rest of the poem ends up painting, so especially the second line seems out of place. I can say that I have a bit of an inkling as to what you mean to say with it, but the wording takes a weird turn and says something different. But everything else is stunning and the musicality flows beautifully right down to the top-notch ending. Well done!!

[Tattiana]

Thank you!! 😊

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

[John the Baptist]

Sounds as though he has at least one loyal supporter. Not everyone can say that.

[Tattiana]

Aww thank you for that. I hope when he sees this he knows that I mean him.