Love is an Synonym For War

A man whom once loved me
is like a man once lost.
If I surrender to him
I surrender to my enemies.

Author's Note

Please comment and review my writing. I will gladly except advice from anyone willing to give it.

Reviews

[Jared Payne]

I loved the comparison you used. It creates a strong message that stays behind in the readers mind. Great poem!

[Tatum]

Thanks. I used it in our novel we write to describe the mother character.