The Dancefloor

I wrote this as I was listening to the song "Careless Whisper" by Seether, originally sung by George Michael.

I watch her near 

the back, her eyes unsure. 

Twinkling with glamorous fear. 

Lashes fluttering cleanly against the 

tops of her cheeks, 

in the pale light of the disco ball. 

Her dress flows beneath 

her knees 

in waves of soft, cloudy white. 

Her eyes settle 

on me, like a feather dropping onto a pillow. 

The song comes on, 

and I make my way 

towards her 

for a dance.

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

This really feels like a tango... words going forward, emotions going forward... a duel of movements, well illustrated by your words. Well done.

p.s. The original Careless Whisper by George Michael is way better than the Seether cover!

[Tazz S.H.]

haha :) thanks i know ^_^ im more into rock though so yeah lol, but ya know...teh oldies are teh best! >:D