The Love I Could Not Feel

I consumed the one whose heat I could not steal.

I dined upon her heat tonight,

I basked within her light.

I solaced as she held me tight  

long into the night.  

I cursed the woman whose love I could not feel.  

Author's Note

Perhaps walking and writing is not the best idea, lol.

Reviews

[samparks,sam]

great feeling in your poem I can see

[NoelHC]

I missed this one, again you speak well of that want and need for another to surrender completely, and to surrender ones self, but we never seem to be able to quite give up to it.
I wonder if the line:
I solaced as she held me tight
may be improved by
I (was) solaced as she held me tight
A good write, as usual Tash.