Believe Then Achieve

Just what the title says.

Don't forget about the past, but don't stay stuck

Look forward, and toward to what you can become

Don't let memories hold you back from achieving and succeeding.

Keep moving forward.

Everyone has difficulties in life,

But not everyone overcomes their diffulculty

And become top of the world

But you can do it

If you just believe

Believe you can achieve

And you can fly

Spread your wings

Soar like the winner you are

You can do it

Just believe

Then achieve

I like this poem because it's about believing in your goals and trying your best to achieve them. I believe I can become a published author, now all I have to do is achieve this belief. I originally wrote this on March 19, 2012.

Reviews

[bryandc15]

Tasha,

I love your piece but sorry for I don't believe that we shouldn't look back for us to succeed... I guess it'll be better if you say: "Make your past an inspiration to move forward." However, we shouldn't lock ourselves with the things from the past.... What I'm just pointing out is that we should neither forget it, nor turn totally aback with it....

This is not a sort of criticism, it's just pure suggestions.... Thanks!!! Anyway, I love this poem...

[Tasha]

Thanks, I appreciate your advice. I can see where you're coming from. I guess we shouldn't forget where we came from. Let me just change that around a bit.

[bryandc15]

thanks for understanding... this piece just became more wonderful... I love it more...

[Tasha]

Thank you :)

[Kevin S.]

Wow! This is very powerful and encouraging! I love this piece!