Cycle

You saw me,

You fell.

You fought for me,

You won.

You got bored of me,

You left.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A quick tale of love shared in the poem Natasha. Love can go from hot to cold, too quickly. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[barleygirl]

Usually I’m not a fan of short poems becuz most writers leave me wanting more. But here, your very short poem is packed with meaning, designed to spark a million more images than the actual words you offer. That’s the whole idea, in my opinion, about writing very short poems. You have to ignite the material that’s residing in the reader’s head & you’ve done that here. I’m thinking of all the times I was caught in my own cycle & each reader can see a cycle that could be very different from the one I saw in your words. Great job (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Natasha]

Thank you!

[Davidgeo]

It all rhymes with 'abandonment complex'.

[Natasha]

What is that?

[Davidgeo]

Exactly what is sounds like... a fear of abandonment.

[Ghost]

Wow this was a powerful poem with just a few lines... I hope that this is not real but if it is I will say sorry for the hurt you feel... I relate to this poem in a different way so I know if it is real I know how you feel... Thanks for sharing

[Natasha]

Thank you, I appreciate it.