Scars

Everywhere,

All over my body.

But no way to get rid of them now.

They are so ugly,

Yet so beautiful,

If you just listen closely

To the stories they tell.

Reviews

[Rashi Jain]

It's so gorgeous. Every scar has a story behind it. No one knows if it's a story to be admired or a story to cry upon except the person who has seen those scars ruining things yet Reminding them of memories or lessons.
Damn Beautiful ❤♥
Keep Writing ☯

[Natasha]

Awh thank you! This totally means a lot. I appreciate it!

[barleygirl]

This is a simple straightforward way to tell a story that has many layers. The simplicity is deceiving, becuz there's more than meets the eye here. My sister, abused in childhood as was I, is obsessed with the scars on her body. She'll point them out, even tho I can't see anything on her skin, but I know it's a big scar to her. You've captured this so perfectly here. Fondly, Margie

[Natasha]

oh wow, I am sorry to hear that, but it's great to embrace your scars whether they are inside or out, visible or not because it tells a story and a battle that you have won or conquered. Thank you so much!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and many of us have scars inside as well...and they also tell a story---life is full of blemishes and scars that leave us more beautiful than before---it is like that song's lyric "you bleed just know you're alive"---

really good poem.
j.

[Natasha]

I agree with that 100%! Thank you so much

[Justin]

That was very powerful, you were able to talk about things that young ppl deal with, great job!!

[Natasha]

Thank you!!

[Justin]

Your welcome, it was amazing how u were able to talk about a sensitive subject!!!

[Natasha]

That's what most of my writing is about! :)

[Justin]

That is amazing, I can let to this!!! Sometimes someone looks in the minor they see the negatives instead of the positives

[Natasha]

Sometimes I do too, but you just gotta work yourself up!

[Justin]

Yup if not, life is going to be horrible, we all have things that ppl wish they have had

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Our scars do tell stories. If we are lucky. Kind folks will tell us some and we may share our own tales. Thank you Natasha for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Natasha]

I agree, thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Natasha.

[N.]

This piece flow very well and I like you said "there are so ugly, yes so beautiful" It is great use of word play. The ended is so intense. This piece is written so strong with not that many words yet you used the right words to tell this story. Wonderful Job.

[Natasha]

Thank you so much :)

[.]

Can relate to this one, Natasha.

We all have our scars; visible or otherwise, and each of them do have a tale to tell. For they are the battle scars of victories won and lost and ours to carry with us for the rest of our days.

I enjoyed the write. Concise and nicely written. Well Done.

[Natasha]

Thank you so much, I really appreciate it.

[Lonnie]

I appreciate this so much.

[Natasha]

Thank you much!

[Lonnie]

You’re very welcome!