Ruined

Heartless,

Is what you made me.

Numb,

Is what you made me feel.

Hope,

Is what you made me lose.

Love,

Is what you made me hate.

On and on, I can go.

About how you ruined me.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

One of my least-favorite aspects of "love lost" messages is the idea that other people "make us" do or feel such things. I believe in taking responsibility for our choices, not blaming the other person for everything. But my viewpoint is not very widespread & most people do exactly as you're describing here -- blaming the other person for one's own actions & choices. I can very much relate to your first point, about feeling heartless after too many hurts. I hope your true view on such matters is a little more hopeful! We are only ruined if we choose to be! Thanks for the powerful message that's true for many other people (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Natasha]

Thank you for your feedback. i just wrote this when I was really angry, so words just kinda come out.

[Unspoken poet]

I can feel some harshness from your words. Deep and painful. Very well expressed emotions

[Natasha]

Thank you, I appreciate it

[Davidgeo]

Reminds me of a couple Nine Inch Nails songs; in a good way. You certainly do dwell in the darkness I see. I spend a lot of time there myself.
(the NIN songs were - Sanctified, Ringfinger, and Head Like a Hole)

[Natasha]

I do, Thank you though

[apennylate]

A rant-esque styled run at things... Makes you definitely want to just matter of fact tell the subject your grievances... On and on, heh... Nicely penned

[Natasha]

Thank you so much for your feedback!

[apennylate]

You are so welcome...!

[Carol Cashes]

Damn, kick his a*s already! I'm mad at him and I don't even know him....
Good job.

[Natasha]

This made me laugh a lot! I wish I could! Thank you so much :))

[N.]

Such sad piece. It is the cry of a broken heart.

[Natasha]

It is indeed. Thank you:)

[Hebe]

Hi Natasha, sad words but full of meaning and a nice flow to your poem .

[Natasha]

Thank you much

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words whispered a tale of love lost and heart broken. I liked the flow of thoughts. Dear Natasha, you made the reader understand the pain and the lost. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Natasha]

Thank you, I appreciate your review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Hope]

Short but a with a rhythm that glues.
Good poem Natasha:)

[Natasha]

Thank you much!

[JT Godin]

Interesting. I think a lot of people can relate to that feeling.

[Natasha]

I totally agree