Love

Love

A Poem by Natasha
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Fiery Passion

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A cloud of butterflies,

A rush of red, hot fire.

The spark in her eyes

Show all that she desires.


Heart pounding like crazy,

Lips lusting for his.

Her vision’s becoming hazy,

She knows what this is.

© 2017 Natasha


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Wonderful poem...she knows wat this is...in this line u make us believe that Ur a wonderful poet. The way u write the last line was amazing..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Beautiful description of love.. Thank you for sharing this poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Natasha

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Amazing use of words Natasha. You made the emotion and feeling come alive for the reader. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I know now how all of this feels
dizzy world lol

I love this piece

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natasha

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
The dashes of pink really tone the vibe, and the chosen words send a direct message. Im riding that wave xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Natasha

7 Years Ago

Ahah, Thank you! I do the coloring of certain words with all of my poems.

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Added on April 10, 2017
Last Updated on April 10, 2017
Tags: Love, Passion, Butterflies

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