Fake but real...

I know I let you go, and trust me I was wanting to die,
But how could you let me go? Oh, please tell me why?

Just one time if you stopped me and find a few words to say,
I promise I would understand you and get ready to stay..

But alas! it didn't happened so we walked in different roads,
And started leading this puzzled life in half alive modes..

Life without you seemed meaningless but time can change everything,
And happiness probably didn't find my address or maybe it has nothing to bring..

Your memories were bittersweet and now it started fading away,
but those eyes keeps displaying on my head every moment of every day..

No hopes of getting back together still waiting for the weekly horoscope,
I've fallen in a deep waterless well, and for climbing up, I have no rope..

Some says true love is never ending,
Then what shall I call this one? Maybe a fake fairy-tail where we were just pretending..

Author's Note

I know its not that good.... I just tried to put a light effect, unlike other poems, not too deep....

Reviews

[Precious]

very emotional ,simple and effective

[ANTO]

i couldnt help thinking of two not so experienced sky-divers here - both depending on the other in case of the ultimate fail - both parachutes of one diver stay closed.
The other diver is pre-occupied with the dive and realises what has happened to the other 'partner' - alas, all too late! Your words are setting off lots of image fireworks in my head.

"And happiness probably didn't find my address or maybe it has nothing to bring.." - this is superb analogy - deeply sad - excellent writing.

'I've fallen in a deep waterless well, and for climbing up, I have no rope.." - I am firmly in the 'its never too late' camp - Lassie may arrive any minute and two barks and serious tail-wag the whole WC village will be at said well with ropes and lights and of course Lassie... ;)

I also believe the penultimate line in this is true. But true love is what it is - it cannot end if it never started.

I find I want to describe this as bitter-sweet but it has no sweets for the reader - nor is it bitter - its very philosophical of the whole scenario and has such sadness.
It is very affecting Annabelle. Well penned my friend. :))

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[Lenah Mehzabin]

Sometimes it's really better to 2let it go not bcoz u want it but bcoz u know its not the time when can hold it even if u want to .the world is runned with power ,if u dont have it now u have to earn it by any means just 2 let the love survive inside the cruel walls. This poem relates with me tip to toe with full meaning of it but the diff is there is a hidden story behind it which ended lyk 'alive dead ' i hve seen those cuts on ya a smooth skin.but dat tym i wasnt collected enough to comfort ya bcz its hard for me to reveal myself in reality but trust me once everything happened with me the same thing u r going through .No words can describe ,no words release the pain nd nor does time never fades anything it just makes us mature enough to accept it ,we cant trust ourself or our lyf anymore but u u knw what ? Just do one thing in lyf never try to express any1 in words that how much u love coz all they need is proves and how much tym u spent with them so just give ur best all the time and wait for the tym when u can nd when u cant just b silent if any1 loves u truely they will always wait even if it takes years nd if they dont then think that it was just an entertainment named love . Life is short and so does time to think about lost past and messes : )

[Tasfia Islam]

Gottya... :P Thanks for the revew...

[Lenah Mehzabin]

well sry for such a long stupidity i just became emotinal oops lol =lp

[Mari K]

You have to have faith in your own abilities. Poetry is personal and it takes a lot to share it with other people and allow it to be judged. When you have confidence in your work, it is evident. Don't downplay a piece by immediately saying it isn't that good. Be proud of your craft...Not everyone is so blessed.

[Tasfia Islam]

:) Gottya... :) Thanks for the advice :)

[DoormanDan]

I wouldnt say its not good, i really like this one. You should believe in yourself more. It probably only feels like its not good because you tried something new, but trust me, you have written a fantastic piece here :)

[Tasfia Islam]

Well, maybe ... :) Thanks a lot ... :) :)

[Jamestown]

This a great piece of work! I could feel the emotions from top to bottom, I am
to familiar with the last line. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thanks a lot... )