You

One day I mean the world to you, the next day just a hi.

The following days u ignore me and leave me alone to cry..

I remember all those vows u made, well u called them promises.

Today life has taught me a lesson that infinite love leaves nothing but deep heart bruises..

Am I torn apart? No, I'm not. I just became invisible in your eyes,

Shattered and exhausted, standing alone, hearing all the playbacks of ur lies..

Your eyes' so pure, words' so smooth, no one can ever doubt,

Your tricky challenge of winning my heart left me thinking what was it all about?

You are a strong man but don't think I'm any less,

I have a strong eraser to wipe away all your mess..

I'm being honest, I've fallen in love with you, and I believe that its not a disease,

Cuz I will always love u even if u fold my heart and create a thousand crease..

Author's Note

Wrote this after a huge gap... Let me know how is it..

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Sadness fill the heart left lonely. A lover left behind to think love was only a game to play her heart in ones hands could be dropped on the ground. Bruised and beaten oh your heart must mend before you can love another or even pretend. You must put this gap behind you now if there in no chance of loves return. Letters can be written without any return. Still many suitor will come along and play on your hearts stings. They will sing you love songs and heal your heart so neat. Yes you wait some man will take the bait. For love its never to late. Just wait for love and go on a date.

[Tasfia Islam]

Oh, that's adorable.... It seems more like a poem..... You must be a really talented writer... :) and glad u liked my writing... Thanks a lot... :)

[DoormanDan]

I notice that with every poem you write, your ability to display emotions through words improves more and more. This poem is superbly written! I especially love the lines, "You are a strong man but don't think I'm any less, I have a strong eraser to wipe away all your mess." It may have been a while since you last posted anything, but this poem was definitely worth the wait :)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thanks a lot.... It means a lot to me, I really try to make improvements in my writing and I'm glad that I did it according to you.... :) Glad you liked it... :)