Someone

Someone who will love me and make me believe it everyday,

Someone who will talk to me about everything in every possible way.

Someone who will feel my pain but won't show it cuz I'll feel worse,

Someone who will make love without the fear of open doors.

The one who will wrestle with me and let me win intentionally,

The one who will kiss me in the rain, and in the sunshine irrationally.

The one who will put my cold hands in his warm hoodie pockets just to feel my nerve,

The one who will let me use his sweatshirt during summer dusk's love.

Someone who finds me beautiful in my every messy look,

Someone who never care the flaws and errs of my body nook.

Some1 who says I'm beautiful not because I am but because he thinks I am,

Someone who lifts me up in the crowd and shout, that's my girl.

The one who realizes that I say things but don't always mean them,

The one who can tell me his problems and let me help him.

The one who can't wait and start kissing in my unbrushed teeth in the mrng,

The one who will give me big tight hugs even when I'm sleeping.

Someone who will never smile at other girls cuz he finds me the prettiest,

Someone who never sees the dark circles, rashes and wrinkles of my face rather says I'm the cutest.

Someone who sleeps with me over night holding me in his arms,

And at morning, he doesn't even know how my body looks but knows after how many seconds my eyes blink at intervals.

But that someone is really really rare, and sometimes I doubt, if that someone even exists anywhere in this world...... :(

Author's Note

Please read and review... :)

Reviews

[Jamsheed Shafi]

a nice read friend.
hope you find that someone.
That 'someone' exists but beautiful things demands patience.
could feel the emotions behind the writeup.
keep writing.

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[Happy hours]

lovely and wonderful dear :)

[Tasfia Islam]

thank you... :)

[TheLostMind]

That someone is really rare... this means he is out there somewhere :).. The poem is kind of cute but I think it needs more emotion in it :). Nevertheless, a really good write :)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[Gee]

There is a someone out there for us all,the hard bit is finding them.Nice

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[Katie Alexander]

The repetition in how you begin your sentences is smart, but I think you need more structure. The idea and the feeling is there! I'd suggest going back to this poem in a couple of weeks and looking at how you can group all these ideas into one flowing story.

[Tasfia Islam]

Gottya.... :) Thanks for the review... :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

There is someone for everyone. It is just a matter of time.
Lovely innocent emotions.
I liked it!!!
:)
Q: do you not like reading poems?

[Tasfia Islam]

Glad you liked it.... Thank you :)

A: Ofcoarse I do.... I love both reading and writing poems... :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Oh wow. Well i hope u didn't mind me asking. The thing is i have never seen any reviews from you. So i was curious. Have a great day!!!

[Emily]

Love the way each line starts!
Keep it up!!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[Terrence Chang]

As always awesome writing. Loved it Annabelle. Brilliant writing

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you so much... :)

[Cool Girl]

Very very true.....I love it!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[Cool Girl]

Welcome.....:)