I'm Sorry....

I'm Sorry....

A Poem by Tasfia Islam

                           

I know, forgiving is hard, but u know, seeking forgiveness is harder..

But I never care in case of you,
I never care about my ego when I seek forgiveness from you.

Sitting in this dark, isolated place,
Static, motionless.
Tears crawling down on my pale skin.
Eyes rarely flatter, mind lost in vain...

The foggy cold continuously bites my hand,
Bare feet on the moist icy floor, almost frozen...

Regretting so bad even when the mistake is so small.

Doesn't matter who did the mistake but I'm always the one to say sorry,
And you are the one who never apologize easily...
I just don't understand why....

Maybe smile doesn't always suit my face,
Or maybe, I deserve to be hanged on this string of apologize but always fail to fetch it.

But this is surely not called life,
Cuz my life means to be with you no matter what.

So, I don't care how many times u reject my apologize, I'll never stop..
I'll keep on saying, "I'm really sorry"

© 2014 Tasfia Islam


Author's Note

Tasfia Islam
This poem is the translation of my tears.... Hope u enjoy it...

Annabelle.

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a touching write,some people are just stubborn,but love always win

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

you don`t sound sure
Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Umm I don't know... :)
 wordman

9 Years Ago

me either,but it sounded good
Ive said it once and i'll say it again, you are a great writer! All of your poems are filled to the brim with raw emotion, which makes them very enjoyable to read. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Thank you soooooooooooo much..... It means a lot to me... :) :)
DoormanDan

9 Years Ago

No problem! :)
You never fail to write such powerful pieces of work! Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Awwhh, thank you so much... :)
Jamie

9 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
Apologising is always difficult, but I think if we really love someone, we have to overcome our ego and say it, even if it is hard. Good writing. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Annabelle if these virtual hugs mean anything to you then (((((HUG)))) - its really strong of you to write if you are this emotional - I couldnt do it. Relationships where one apologises for doing nothing are very common but also really unfair and it cant be love that drives them - power probably.
Writing must help - I wish you well dear writer.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Awww....thank you .....and for the tight hug too, it made me feel better... :)
My ego is always in the perk but ..*sign* i end up apologising ..a habit which is always felt ryt in case of one person ;) :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Hmmmm....right :)
i've felt like that before yes it's so painful when you start getting all the sweet memories and knowing that all what you were living is now "past" don' be sad things will be good belive me and he will aplogize for you ...........guys never regret easliy with time he will know that he had a pearl . veary great job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

:) ...maybe...

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