I'm Sorry....

                           

I know, forgiving is hard, but u know, seeking forgiveness is harder..

But I never care in case of you,
I never care about my ego when I seek forgiveness from you.

Sitting in this dark, isolated place,
Static, motionless.
Tears crawling down on my pale skin.
Eyes rarely flatter, mind lost in vain...

The foggy cold continuously bites my hand,
Bare feet on the moist icy floor, almost frozen...

Regretting so bad even when the mistake is so small.

Doesn't matter who did the mistake but I'm always the one to say sorry,
And you are the one who never apologize easily...
I just don't understand why....

Maybe smile doesn't always suit my face,
Or maybe, I deserve to be hanged on this string of apologize but always fail to fetch it.

But this is surely not called life,
Cuz my life means to be with you no matter what.

So, I don't care how many times u reject my apologize, I'll never stop..
I'll keep on saying, "I'm really sorry"

Author's Note

This poem is the translation of my tears.... Hope u enjoy it...

Annabelle.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

very genuine
really speaks out

[Kamari's]

Very touching and beautiful write

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)

[Happy hours]

First line of the poem says it all....awesome write dear... :)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[SmittyJas]

Wow Powerful write of Apologize I ever seen how could someone treat you so mean. You can't be wrong all the time. Someone should step up and be the man and take responsibility for some wrongs done on you. Love is a two way street. Never meant to be one sided. Best wishes to you God's blessings Too.

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you so much... :)

[Duckey]

this is so relateable, and so wonderfully written. It has such strong emotions and meaning to it and really made an impact on me while reading it. I love it and keep up the great writing

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you so much... It means a lot... :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Annabelle, this poem was amazing from the word go. Your a very talented writer, you have such a way with words. Nicely penned.

Kaze~

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you so much.... It means a lot to me.. :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Terrence Chang]

Annabelle your start gave me away. I never wanted this to end what a lovely poem you have written. I want to keep reading this. You are amazingly amazing. Keep up the good work.

[Tasfia Islam]

Awwww..... Thank you... :)

[Terrence Chang]

Your welcome

[Emily]

Love the way you started it off!
Keep it up!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you so much Emily... :)

[Shafqat Mushtaq]

when words fall short, emotions come to rescue!!!
truly a power pack of emotions. you did it well.

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)

[Shafqat Mushtaq]

welcome ...

[wordsofheart]

A very deep and touching poem. The way of your writing is splendid.
I was easily able to relate myself to most of it.
Well Done! Keep it up!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you :)

[wordsofheart]

Welcome :)