Let me go....

I believe that someday, you will learn to live without me...

I just don't wanna make you feel any worse
It makes me feel more like a corpse...

You always say that I'm perfect, I'm great
And that's what I mostly hate.....

I'm not that girl, not even a bit of it
I'm just a disaster which your heart doesn't want to delete...

Please forgive me, let me go...
Your heart will be fixed someday, but maybe real slow...

You are a diamond piece and I'm just a sand hue
Your brightness gives me a bit shine but can't make me diamond too...

We might have the same music taste and every other things quite similar
But still we can't drive our life with the same car....

Life is not so easy as you and your dreamy eyes see
It needs a perfect partner to move which I can never be....

So please forget me, let me go....
Your heart will be fixed someday, but maybe real slow.....

Author's Note

I already put my heart in this poem....Every word carried one teardrop.... Hope you could feel the pain behind the words and make me believe that I succeeded to express.... please review

Reviews

[jemaral]

In terms of being able to express it i say you did a good job. Not the exact words but I have been in the receiving end of the sentiment that your piece embodies.. im sorry but even now I cannot begin to understand why it ends relationships given that its used sincerely and not as an excuse. I mean if the emotion exist still between the two individuals why not let it flourish. Im not sure but the sentiment itself stems from the idea that person expressing it feels he/she is undeserving vessel for the other persons love and affection and for me its irrelevant since for most people when they fall in love the question whether the object of their affection is deserving of it never arises. Deciding whether one thing is deserving of another is an act guided by reason and logic two things which isn't exactly Love's strong point.. Sorry for the extra aggressive review the subject matter is just a bit too close to home for me ( I still have a lot to say on the matter but the review area is not the place) .. the fact that this piece is able to elicit such a response from me its reader means you were able to express the message with flying colors.. " It needs a perfect partner to move which I can never be...." one last thing about this line no existence is perfect. Even if it seems that were looking for that perfect someone each of have standards and lists of things that constitute " perfect " we habitually fall for people that dont match up the your so called standards. Personally I believe that we aren't really looking for the perfect partner but rather the partner that's perfect for us. P.S. Again i apologize for the lengthy rant.. and don't get the wrong idea I loved the piece it's just that i have a lot of bottled up opinions on the subject...

[Tasfia Islam]

Well, sometimes love sticks in tough situations which can only be felt, but cannot be explained...And love doesn't have any logic or reasons, love is simply love. Even if the love separates, it doesn't really end....We all think that love can keep everything strong and that its enough for living together, but its just a dream....In reality, things are so unfair....Sacrifice comes before love....The girl in the poem says all of those things just as excuse....What she really meant was that they can't be together, not because she was getting too selfish, but because she loved him too much....As u said the things about being perfect, well, you are right, no existence is perfect...but they becomes perfect for a particular person, and she couldn't succeed to become his perfect girl....And yes, we aren't looking perfect person but rather a person who is perfect for us.... And that's what I told...
Thank you very much for the review...I hope you got your answers....but still if I'm wrong at any point, say it... :) keep reviewing.....I love it... :) It gives gives a lot to learn .....

[Laura Lynn]

I love this, I hope I will remember this for my life, it is a dilemma to want to be perfect for a person when we want to be but cannot, I still want to be perfect for a person, but it is very hardt

[Tasfia Islam]

Yeah... exactly... Any ways, thank you... :)

[DoormanDan]

I can really tell you put all of your heart in this poem, and it is beautifully well written. You succeeded in making me feel the pain behind every word, and I congratulate you, not everybody can do that so easily.

[Tasfia Islam]

Awww... Thank you so much... :)

[free will]

Kind of hard to push someone away when you know you're not ready. Seems very selfish but unless you're ready you wont be good for anyone until you're good for yourself. well done :)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[Katherine Vice]

"Your brightness gives me a bit shine but can't make me diamond too"

I just felt a lot of pain in this line, and the poem overall is very well done. Great job!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you so much.... :)

[Happy hours]

So please forget me, let me go....
Your heart will be fixed someday, but maybe real slow.....

loved it how you use these two lines in the poem...beautiful writing :)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[Emily]

Love the meaning!
Well done!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)

[Sanjh]

Wonderful ..!!! You have expressed yourself brilliantly.
Thank you for sharing...:)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... my pleasure.. :)

[klawrites]

This is beautiful and your emotion really shines through. Well done :)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[Stephanie K.]

Best poem of yours I've read. I felt your emotion and a deep connection to this piece. Thank you for sharing.

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you, my pleasure...