What if today nothing is like yesterday? And no one have enough attention for you to pay....
What if everyone and everything in your life tore apart? And recklessly poured salt in your torn heart....
What if no one cares for you today like they did before? And doesn't seek your opinion less or more.... Don't cry, Have patience.... There's always a tomorrow.....
What if today no one cares about your tears? And doesn't even will to look at your fears.....
What if no one puts bandage in your wounds? And they no more laughs at your funny sounds....
What if no one no more justifies your opinion? And doesn't involve you in any family re-union.....
Remember,, for them, you are always the minion...
So, don't cry, Have patience..... There's always a tomorrow
Loneliness is the obvious focus of the piece for the most part and switches to hope and encouragement near the end. I like that for the parts where loneliness was being communicated the phrase " what if " was constantly used. It displays our fear of being alone and feeling lonely even if sometimes we are not. Sometimes we are so consumed by this fear that we lose the ability to see and notice the things and people around us. Loneliness can sometimes be an illusion, you feel so hopelessly alone and yet still be surrounded by people who love and care for you.. True patience is important but sometimes all it takes is to open our eyes and look around.
I don't know if you describe a feeling you have or if this is a statement in general, but I alway surprised I'm not alone with all these fears. I try not to admit to those feelings, because it can cause great harm, but I don't always succeed. You're growing in your writings, Annabelle. I like it.
Loneliness is the obvious focus of the piece for the most part and switches to hope and encouragement near the end. I like that for the parts where loneliness was being communicated the phrase " what if " was constantly used. It displays our fear of being alone and feeling lonely even if sometimes we are not. Sometimes we are so consumed by this fear that we lose the ability to see and notice the things and people around us. Loneliness can sometimes be an illusion, you feel so hopelessly alone and yet still be surrounded by people who love and care for you.. True patience is important but sometimes all it takes is to open our eyes and look around.
it s very nice. i like this hope on the end. that really make me happy. human lonelynes can be very painfull. when nobody care and you feel very low. and everyday same pain . only what can safe you it s faith at your self. very nice write thank you.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I'm glad u liked it.... :) And you are welcome... :)
very thoughtful writings...yes you're right one should have patience in life because there's always a tomorrow which could be the better or best for you...one should not loose the hope :) nice job
Amazing job as always. But there's one thing, i don't think wound rhymes with sound. but still keep up the good work and there's always a tomorrow. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you... :) Wound is pronounced in two different ways according to the difference of accents...... read moreThank you... :) Wound is pronounced in two different ways according to the difference of accents....So, in one of them, wound rhymes with sound....And, that's what i used... But still if I'm wrong, please say it... It will help me... :)
I'm a girl......just a girl with lot of characters....I passed 15 years of my life and felt the sweetness and bitterness of this teenage.......Soon, i'll be 16 yrs......a lot of things are waiting for.. more..