There's always a tomorrow...

What if today nothing is like yesterday?
And no one have enough attention for you to pay....

What if everyone and everything in your life tore apart?
And recklessly poured salt in your torn heart.... 

What if no one cares for you today like they did before?
And doesn't seek your opinion less or more....

Don't cry, Have patience....
There's always a tomorrow.....

What if today no one cares about your tears?
And doesn't even will to look at your fears.....

What if no one puts bandage in your wounds?
And they no more laughs at your funny sounds....

What if no one no more justifies your opinion?
And doesn't involve you in any family re-union.....

Remember,, for them, you are always the minion...

So, don't cry, Have patience.....
There's always a tomorrow

Author's Note

This is a poem for all those teens who feels lonely like me.... Please don't cry,,, have patience,,, there's always a tomorrow.... :)

Don't forget to review.... :) :)

Reviews

[jemaral]

Loneliness is the obvious focus of the piece for the most part and switches to hope and encouragement near the end. I like that for the parts where loneliness was being communicated the phrase " what if " was constantly used. It displays our fear of being alone and feeling lonely even if sometimes we are not. Sometimes we are so consumed by this fear that we lose the ability to see and notice the things and people around us. Loneliness can sometimes be an illusion, you feel so hopelessly alone and yet still be surrounded by people who love and care for you.. True patience is important but sometimes all it takes is to open our eyes and look around.

[Tasfia Islam]

:) Thank you.... I'm glad u liked it.... :)

[C. Rose]

"recklessly poured salt into your torn heart" - ouch!
My favorite stanza is "justifies your opinion ... family reunion"
I like that you end with positivity.

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you so much... :)

[ANTO]

An amazing impact from the off - the picture - I spent many nights doing the same in my own window when I was in my teens many years ago
A lovely piece of self-comfort and bouying up the soul. It brought me back to schooldays and Shakespeare
"Tomorrow, and tomorrow, and tomorrow,
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day
To the last syllable of recorded time" (Macbeth)

nicely done Annabelle

[Tasfia Islam]

Glad you liked it.... Thank you... :)

[Abhishekizy]

Good write and a comforting one too!! Trust me teenage is always the most happening yet lonely (up in one's head) age!! Everyone passes through it, so will you!! Take care

[Tasfia Islam]

Glad you liked it.....Thank you.. :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I love this!!!!!!!!!! Honestly you are amazing!!

[Tasfia Islam]

Oh thankyou.....and honestly, u r far better than me.....:)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

You welcome! That is so not true!

[Tasfia Islam]

No, I meant it.... :) Your writings are too good... :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

You too!!!

[Tasfia Islam]

:).....thank you

[Valkyrie Warrior]

You are so welcome

[Lenah Mehzabin]

exactly !.. there is always a tomorrow! .. we shouldn't let our present sufferings let our future die .. a positive hope always have a positive result .. maybe not now but eventually.

[Tasfia Islam]

Yeah.... :)

[Eleanor]

Like I said loneliness can make a person destroy themselves. But I like the way you tell that there's always light after the darkness.
We just need to have hope and not give up. This touched my heart :) Great poem!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[DoormanDan]

You really struck a chord in my heart with this one. I've felt alone many times before, but inside I always knew that I wasn't really. Thank you for posting this piece, it's nice to have someone I can relate to.

There are a few spots in this where the English needs a little improving, but that's only about 3% of it. Regardless, this poem is still absolutely wonderful. Good job!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... I'll try to fix my flaws... :)

[Sanjh]

A very true message. Teenagers nowadays are growing too fast, they need to be patient and believe on a better future as they have their whole life in front of them. So don't loose hope and move on.
It's wonderfully written, some errors are there. But overall a great write...:)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Tommorow does carries dreams hopes n expectaion. Loved this one Maam

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)

[MsJewel]

There is always hope, there is always tomorrow. You have shared a wonderful message in this inspirational gem. Beautifully done.

:) Julie

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you so much... :)