Definition of love....

Definition of love....

A Poem by Tasfia Islam

  When u fall in love, u stop watching romantic movies....
 Because u think ur life is more romantic than movies....

 U don't really cry even when the movie couple separates
 Because you have the belief that your love will never mess..

 Love is when you wake up in the morning with a smile
 Cuz u can imagine that very soon u will walk down the aisle

 Love is when u can't sleep at night
 Cuz ur reality is far better than the beauty dream sight

 But love is not always the same and plated
 Sometimes its smooth and sometimes its complicated


Complications are when u shed tears and value them
Its when u forget ur own existence for someone damn....

Pain is when u cry sitting back to romantic movies which once u left behind
And warm ur heart to save it from being cold enough to loose the last breath wind..

But pain can never kill love which was so strong once upon
But yes, it might fade the heart, but love is always love no matter what falls on...

© 2014 Tasfia Islam


Author's Note

Tasfia Islam
Another writing for my fellow readers with few definitions of love.... :) hope you will enjoy it.... :) And don't forget to review..... :) :p

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Nice read Annabelle!! The rhyme seems a lil forced at times, but overall a good read!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

In which stanza do u think the rhymes a Lil forced?.....I would like to know.... So that I can cover.. read more
Abhishekizy

9 Years Ago

Here are the two:

#1
Love is when u can't sleep at night
Cuz ur reality is.. read more
Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Hmm.......I got it... :)
This is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The rhyming is excellent!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

You are so welcome! my pleasure!
Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

:) :) :)......
Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

;D!!!!!!!!
This is a very beautiful piece of your definition of love! Interesting to read and easy to relate to! I must remind you of not using short hand! It might have been intentional? I do not know!
Love is when your heart thinks for you and claims the brain a dummy!
Love is smilling just at s/her thought
Love is overlooking all the little faults
Love is.... Wait thanx for giving me an idea for a poem "Love is..." I will be honoured if you reviewed it first when I publish it....(Smile)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

haha.... Sure... :) And I'm glad u liked my poem... :) Thank you..
I liked ur first stanzes where u said .. ''when u are in love you believe dat ur love will never mess'' and dats when u dont cry anymore while watching the movie (i thought i was the only one who thinks lyk this ) ;)...
great job Annabelle ! u beautifully described all the true feelings of love .. great job ! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Thank you.... :)
It's beautiful Annabelle...keep it up...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much.... :)
Beautiful definition of love. I think their are many definitions of love, but finally all definitions talk about caring, sharing life's sorrows but also fine things, it talks about the greatest form of altruism. Keep writing. :)
Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Thank you... I surely will.... :)
Love has many definitions...but you defined it very well....I can relate it with myself...beautifully written :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Thank you.... :)
Happy hours

9 Years Ago

welcome :)
I enjoyed reading it. And nicely defined. I like the following lines,

U don't really cry even when the movie couple
separates
Because you have the belief that your love will
never mess..
Keep writing dear and please review my writing too. I'll much appreciate that.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much.... :)
Love is so difficult to define and yet you have done so beautifully.

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

Thank you.... :)
A great definition of love. It is valuable indeed. Bravo............

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

9 Years Ago

:) Thank you so much.... :) :)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....

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Added on November 21, 2014
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