When u fall in love, u stop watching romantic movies.... Because u think ur life is more romantic than movies....
U don't really cry even when the movie couple separates Because you have the belief that your love will never mess..
Love is when you wake up in the morning with a smile Cuz u can imagine that very soon u will walk down the aisle
Love is when u can't sleep at night Cuz ur reality is far better than the beauty dream sight
But love is not always the same and plated Sometimes its smooth and sometimes its complicated
Complications are when u shed tears and value them Its when u forget ur own existence for someone damn....
Pain is when u cry sitting back to romantic movies which once u left behind And warm ur heart to save it from being cold enough to loose the last breath wind..
But pain can never kill love which was so strong once upon But yes, it might fade the heart, but love is always love no matter what falls on...
In which stanza do u think the rhymes a Lil forced?.....I would like to know.... So that I can cover.. read moreIn which stanza do u think the rhymes a Lil forced?.....I would like to know.... So that I can cover up the flaws.... Thankyou
9 Years Ago
Here are the two:
#1
Love is when u can't sleep at night
Cuz ur reality is.. read moreHere are the two:
#1
Love is when u can't sleep at night
Cuz ur reality is far better than the beauty dream sight.
#2
Complications are when u shed tears and value them
Its when u forget ur own existence for someone damn....
Please take it as a constructive feedback!! You know i do love your work!!
This is a very beautiful piece of your definition of love! Interesting to read and easy to relate to! I must remind you of not using short hand! It might have been intentional? I do not know!
Love is when your heart thinks for you and claims the brain a dummy!
Love is smilling just at s/her thought
Love is overlooking all the little faults
Love is.... Wait thanx for giving me an idea for a poem "Love is..." I will be honoured if you reviewed it first when I publish it....(Smile)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
haha.... Sure... :) And I'm glad u liked my poem... :) Thank you..
I liked ur first stanzes where u said .. ''when u are in love you believe dat ur love will never mess'' and dats when u dont cry anymore while watching the movie (i thought i was the only one who thinks lyk this ) ;)...
great job Annabelle ! u beautifully described all the true feelings of love .. great job ! :)
Beautiful definition of love. I think their are many definitions of love, but finally all definitions talk about caring, sharing life's sorrows but also fine things, it talks about the greatest form of altruism. Keep writing. :)
Rudi
I enjoyed reading it. And nicely defined. I like the following lines,
U don't really cry even when the movie couple
separates
Because you have the belief that your love will
never mess..
Keep writing dear and please review my writing too. I'll much appreciate that.
I'm a girl......just a girl with lot of characters....I passed 15 years of my life and felt the sweetness and bitterness of this teenage.......Soon, i'll be 16 yrs......a lot of things are waiting for.. more..