I'm human, I live
I cry, I bleed
I love, I laugh
I want, I need
I lose, I win
I eat, I sleep
I know, I see
I play for keeps.
I wonder, I wish
I talk, I say
I give thanks
For another day.
I stop, I go
I sing. I dance
I believe in God
And a second chance.
I hope, I pray
I care, I dream
I understand things
Aren't always as they seem
I touch, I feel
I stand, I fall
I age, I die
I'm human after all.
Such a fine list of emotional YOU, here to show and tell, barely a pause or sigh.. each area metric resonance, descriptive and heartfelt. Every line precious but.. finishing with what you might call fervour. ,
'I stop, I go
I sing. I dance
I believe in God
And a second chance.
I hope, I pray
I care, I dream
I understand things
Aren't always as they seem
I touch, I feel
I stand, I fall
I age, I die'
Posted 4 Weeks Ago
1 of 2 people found this review constructive.
4 Weeks Ago
Thank you for taking time to read my write. Time and love are the true gifts of life. We sometimes d.. read moreThank you for taking time to read my write. Time and love are the true gifts of life. We sometimes don't give much pause on the giving end but when on the receiving end, the fact that we are limited by one and in search of the other, makes receiving either, an opportunity to appreciate the true value of the gift.
4 Weeks Ago
We're all different as to how we react and love.. that is what we find out. Surely.
YES to most of those human thoughts and hopes… you really listed what most of us relate to, a big list and if we can’t accomplish all, no matter we are all unique humans; thank you for sharing!!😊
Warmly B
Posted 1 Month Ago
4 Weeks Ago
Thank you Ms. Betty for the time you took to read it.
I am a day dreamer and a night thinker.. I pretend to be brave & fearless, in truth, I am afraid of my own thoughts..of knowing and of not knowing.. of everything and of nothing... i get lost in the s.. more..