Cutting lose by Tara Mowery

this story is about a girl who is having a great year when everything turns upside down. and things go downhill which cause her to push herself over the edge. thankfully someone is there to catch her

some things in life can be the best experiance of your life, others can be the worst. this year was going to be the worst year i had ever experianced. but i didnt know, not yet.

the summer just ended and i was going into  high school. things had gone pretty smooth so far, but who knows what the first day of school will bring. My friends Tasha, Renee and i graduated fromgrand lake middle school last may and are starting as freshmen this year as Grand lake high. im looking forward to school and being in a whole differant setting. rumor is its easy. no more drama between boys and girls. the work is not much harder. and they give you less homework too! hearing all that stuff i wasnt worried at all; except for one thing. Prom. I know that  everyone will get a date; everyone but me. of course, all the "populars" will get the cutest and hottest guys in the nineth grade.

the populars consist or Megan, Brook, Taylor, Danni and ryan. they are all basically these rich brats that think they are bad. the only two reasons the guys like them is cause: A, They stuff their b***s to make them look like they have D's. but the guys think they really do! and B, they will do basically anything and everything with a guy and any guy for that matter. They are very athletic and are good at every sport imaginable. The biggest brats are Taylor and Brook. Brook does gymnastics and to be honest, shes not very good. Taylor is a bleach blonde with blue eyes, kinda like a barbie, atleast thats what the guys say. megan is the shortest one and pretty much the nicest one out of them all. She loves shopping, probably cause she gets whatever she wants. the newest members of the group are my ex-best friends, Danni and Ryan. Danni is a blonde whith Hazel eyes. she absolutely loves to dance! Ryan has light brown hair and green eyes. she also loves to dance. the three of us were inseperable. we did absolutely everything together. sat together, ate together, shopped together, babysat together, watched movies together; that is until eighth grade. thats when they went to the dark side and became rich brats. but know ive met my real friends. i met Tasha and Renee last year. we never talked much until that one day.

I was crying in the hall cause thats when Danni and Ryan told me they didnt want to be my friends anymore. that they were friends with the populars. i didnt understand! we had always disspised the populars cause they weree never nice to us. i cried alot that day. then when i was sitting out in the hall, Renee and Tasha walked by and sat next to me and let me tell them everything. they comforted me and before ya knew it we were as tight as could be. of course, i still missed Danni and Ryan and all the stuff we used to do together. i still couldnt believe they ditched me! we were suppose to be b.f.f.'s! but now im best friends with Tasha and Renee and i know they will never leave me!

Tasha is a total tomboy. she plays softball and loves football! Renee is just the opposite! she loves shopping! she hates sports or anything you might get hurt in. she is the type of girl that will most deffinately say "oh no! i broke a nail!" the funny thing is, even though these two are totally different,l they get along fine!

Reviews

[Dr Jack Edward Effron]

It is good to see young adult/teen writing from the point of view of the young adult/teen.
Revise capitalisation! Almost every one is wrong!
Also a lot of grammar mistakes.
Your descriptions of people are very good.
Editors don't like italics and will despise ALL italics!
Keep writing as you are good at it and will get better and better!

[UnwrittenLoveStory]

I like it.