A day that never comes.

Waiting. All I've done, all i ever will do.

The day of hope

and diminished fear

so close

so freaking near

pushed back

by things unforseen

happens to the best

know what I mean?

Forced to sit back

sing mournful hums

all peacefully awaiting

the day that never comes

the unforgiven watch

and mock what they see

never truly accepting

the horrid things that be

when will they learn

the pain they bring

started all with them

and their burdens sting

things not remembered

things not occurred

not correct philosophy

horrid thoughts stir

living life confused

is it life at all?

are we born innocent

only to fail and fall?

peace of mind in sight

yet not yet achieved

pain inside evolving

not yet relived

forced to sit, horrified,

watch, and hum

waiting simply

for a day that will never come.

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awwww! the pain and anguish is clearly felt here. Such sorrow and depression... It is sad when days are like that. But remember, like once you have told me, there will be a better day eventually! And don't give up hope! =) I really liked your poem though. Your emotions is expressed well. and i love the flow of this piece. Beautiful, haunting in a way that is saddening, and just brilliant!

[Riley Mistwood]

Wow. Great read.

[K-mo]

this is amazing! I really like it a lot, good job!!!