Immortal pleasures

Immortal pleasures

A Poem by Brownie
"

Live in the present, you'll recieve the benefits in the future.

"

 In pursuit of happiness

You'll come across - I came across

Many devils, many freinds

much showbiz, many trends

 

Being happy is a state of bliss

But how do you recognize it

Is a smile on lips

the testimony of inner glow and harmony

this will be shallow even if half true

Happiness indeed needs a definition anew

 

A luaugh or a smile just isn't enough

to explain to yourself that you have recieved enough

Even when contentment has dawned upon you

wont a restlessness haunt upon you

 

Yes! it will

Blessingly

Even when you feel satisfied

you'll know that when you said "I am Happy"

you 've lied

You wont be happy with these external pleasures

'cos if you have won minds

there are hearts too

If you have conquered hearts

there is one left to be so

and that is your heart to be won

 

Because this process will tire you

 Keeping you in dire callousness

As the happiness that you seeked

was outside you

The happiness you wanted

remains outside you

 

Winning hearts and minds and goals

you forgot to care for your own

You! mortal could never find

the pleasure you needed

The true state of Bliss

of your own soul

The restlessness and the Anxiety

has upsurged you

Kept you away

From yourself

 

And so you never met yourself

And never found your Immortal Pleasures.

© 2013 Brownie


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good work :)....

Posted 11 Years Ago


The title itself is compelling...Rhyming scheme is fantastic although in third stanza thr is a minor spelling mistake 'Laugh' which is probably a typing error
otherwise.. Kudos!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brownie

11 Years Ago

thanks a lot .... yeah that was a spelling error... to err ... human
very nicely penned. i think you have been trying to put a definition for what happiness is, people say different views about that..some say happiness is satisfaction, some think it is accepting what we get...

Posted 11 Years Ago


khalid

11 Years Ago

my pleasure
silasa

11 Years Ago

nice!
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Brownie
Brownie

Dehradun, Dehradun, India



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I am a girl who loves reading novels, poems and any beautiful piece of writing... i love to write poems though i dont write too well, but they are a just a means to express myself. I love the rains an.. more..

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