Hmm...
Really, I know that you've probably heard this many times before, but - you're not alone!
I'm sure that almost every teenager in North America can relate to this poem, or could have at one point.
Everyone doubts themselves, everyone is unsure of what to say at times, everyone feels excluded or less important. But....
What the thing to do is , if you don't feel like you're being accepted, or you feel ashamed or embarrassed when you say what you feel, is just FORGET ABOUT IT, DON'T SWEAT IT. Let it roll off shoulders, trust me no one is anaylizing your every word, your every move, no one is critizing your every word, every move, only YOU are...& that's the problem.
You will really feel much better if you just be yourself, allow yourself to say/think/be how you are, how you want to be - if you act yourself, you will feel more unique, therefore you will feel like you have a place of your own in this world.
Hun, sitting around & watching your life pass by is a drag, & you will regret not doing anything about it someday- trust me.
This is a very good piece of work, a very true poem.
The flow is great, and words are perfect.
Thanks for sharing.
P.S.- Sorry for writing you a story as a review :P
I got a little carried away.
Hmm...
Really, I know that you've probably heard this many times before, but - you're not alone!
I'm sure that almost every teenager in North America can relate to this poem, or could have at one point.
Everyone doubts themselves, everyone is unsure of what to say at times, everyone feels excluded or less important. But....
What the thing to do is , if you don't feel like you're being accepted, or you feel ashamed or embarrassed when you say what you feel, is just FORGET ABOUT IT, DON'T SWEAT IT. Let it roll off shoulders, trust me no one is anaylizing your every word, your every move, no one is critizing your every word, every move, only YOU are...& that's the problem.
You will really feel much better if you just be yourself, allow yourself to say/think/be how you are, how you want to be - if you act yourself, you will feel more unique, therefore you will feel like you have a place of your own in this world.
Hun, sitting around & watching your life pass by is a drag, & you will regret not doing anything about it someday- trust me.
This is a very good piece of work, a very true poem.
The flow is great, and words are perfect.
Thanks for sharing.
P.S.- Sorry for writing you a story as a review :P
I got a little carried away.