Destiny

She knew it well,
She has feelings for him,
And so did he.

He knew it well,
He can trust her blindly,
And so did she .

Both of them tried ,
Really very hard,
To confess their feelings,
But in the end ,
Everything changed.

They were separated,
And never met again,
Is this the end ?
Will they meet again?

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Beautifully written. Great poem Taniska. Keep writing :)

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thank you so much Mam 😊😊. (Smiles )

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes chances pass us by when we don't express our feelings...we assume the other knows how we feel.
j.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Exactly sir . That happens and that's the reality . Thanks sir for your kind visit 😊😊. (( Smiles))

[John the Baptist]

Unfortunately, people don't always live happily ever after. The time in this one was just not right.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Yeah cause in this poem both souls wants to get together forever but what should they do 'destiny '. Thanks sir for visiting my page . ((Smiles )) 😊😊

[Onlyme]

Situations, people, life in general. Just happen and move on. No right no wrong. Just life being life. Nicely expressed and heartfelt.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanks Mam . I'm glad to know you like it . (( Smiles )) 😊😊

[barleygirl]

This is the complete opposite of what I said about your other poem. Here, there is NO BLAME at all. Life just happens . . . like destiny! This is what I love to see in a love or heartbreak poem. I love how this message is so intelligent & honest & realistic about how things really happen between people. I especially love that you offer no answers, just questions . . . that's real life! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thank you mam. I hope I touched your heart through this poem right. For me you are really good reader . I'm glad you like it . Thanks for visiting my page ((( Smiles ))) 😊😊😊