A Girl

What will you feel ?

If you will meet a girl ,
Who has no sense.

What will you feel ?

If you will find a girl
Who is a fool .

What will you feel ?

If u will meet a girl ,
Who is very bad in friendship.

What will you feel ?

If you will meet a girl ,
Who always use to fight with others.

"Tell the truth "

Author's Note

Tell me the truth that what you feel about this girl !!

Reviews

[7's]

if we skip 'bad in friendship': i can actually relate it to like girls, truly.

[A.G.]

i really like this poem and i feel i can relate to some of the characteristics you described about the girl lol :D i feel if i met a girl like this, i would be there for them and try to understand them more. i would feel hopeful...i loved it. thank you for sharing Taniska!
-Angelina

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx Angelina for visiting my page your words touched my heart so thanks a lot .(( Smiles)) 😊😊😊

[A.G.]

Smiles, your welcome and same here. your poem touched me as well :D

[Onlyme]

I would try to talk to them and understand them and help them. As they sound lonely and sad and lack self-esteem. That is just me though. Everyone is different in this vast world. Nice interesting thoughtful poem.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx a lot mam for visiting my page and that's sweet of you . ((Smiles )) 😊😊😊😊

[Onlyme]

my pleasure sweetheart.

[barleygirl]

In my younger days, I would've been sympathetic, becuz I was drawn to misfits. Now I have no time or patience for people who are no good at being a friend. Your poem could describe me, since I'm no good at being a friend either. As I get older, I don't want to work at being friends! If it doesn't come naturally, I'm gone. I admire you for coming up with interesting ideas in your writing. This one brings up good discussion! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Taniska 😊😊]

Same here mam am also not good in making freinds like this girl but still I have such freinds like you and all the members of this cafe . And I have also some freinds who use to support me in my school . Thanx a lot mam for visiting my page . I glad u like it . ((Smiles )) 😊😊😊

[Chris Shaw]

Everybody feels differently. No two people feel the same. Your lines speak to me of someone who has no self esteem. There are some of us out here who would try and help that girl see the goodness inside her which she is too afraid to let out. Friends bring out the best in people. That's what I think Taniska. All good wishes.

Chris

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx mam . I wanna tell you onething that she is one of my freind.And today I find her in tears and she told me this things and I use to understood her that what she was telling is wrong . So, I want to know from you all that what can I do to help her . And here from your review I find that . I should have to help her at everytime by supporting her not in bad but in good time.

[Chris Shaw]

Find out why she is in pain. She is, and support her. Be a friend who can help her see again that life is good. :)

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thank u mam I will try !!