I know a boy

I know a boy .
Who has no shame.
Always smiles at me.
Dont even knowing my name

He is a guy .
Quite different from us.
His favorite dish is .
Caps and chalks.

He stares at me.
Without any reason.
And always helps me.
Without my permission.

He is a guy.
Who didnt know my name
And I know .
He has no shame.

Reviews

[H L Rose]

I think the simplicity of the poem is perfect! It feels very light and authentic. It made my heart flutter as I read it 😊.

Though “has no shy” sounds a bit strange, I think it is an interesting use of language that can fit well in the poem.

I like how we are introduced to a different aspect about the “boy” in each stanza. I don’t really understand the “caps and chalk”, but I know that is probably just my lack of knowledge.

“Always smiles at me./I don’t know why” are my favorite lines!

I did notice in the last stanza “by” should be “bye”.

I loved reading this!

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thank you very much Mam and also thanks for your kind suggestion 😊😊😊

[H L Rose]

Of course! Hope I could be of help!

[Taniska 😊😊]

Mam caps refers to the pen caps and chalks refer to the black board chalk okk . It's strange naa 😄😄😄😄

[H L Rose]

Oh that's interesting! Are you referring to the subject like biting his pen caps? That makes perfect sense. I'm just not paying attention.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Yaa mam biting his caps . He is a unique boy . And you know he also use to eat soil . It's funny naa 😂😂😂

[H L Rose]

😂 lol. Yes that’s funny

[Taniska 😊😊]

😂😂😂😂😂 !!!

[Cyria Writer]

love this poem

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx !!! 😊😊

[Amada]

Bade dino k baad writerscafe pr aaj chand nikla.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Matlab ?? 🤔🤔🤔

[bigfootprint]

We know why. This is cute, Taniska. You charm us with your coyness and tease us with your soulful treatment of an age before the whole of young love comes into focus. Those days still live under my fading cowlicks, and that gives me something to write about sometimes, too. Too soon the innocence we see here will erupt hot enough to burn our fingers and break our hearts. But take heart, Taniska. you will likely grasp the concepts long before he suspects a thing.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Hello , sir thanks for your kind words ((smiles)) 😊😊😊

[Onlyme]

Great poem Taniska, made me smile and a lovely witty write.

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx Dawn I glad that you like it !! ((Smiles)) 😊😊😊

[wordman]

loved it,simple and refreshing write

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx sir !! 😊😊😊😊

[wordman]

you`re welc

[V.J.]

"Stairs" should be "stares".

Now I must be truly honest. I've read a lot of poems on this site, and I don't
generally read poems.
This is, without a doubt, my favorite one I've read so far, since I've been here.
It's simple, yet thoughtful. And it was kind of like reading a story about how it's going to end.
Please, you should write a second chapter of this. I guess I like this so much 'cause I'm curious about this guy who's so different and why he's giving the girl his attention so much.

Keep it up. I'll let you know if I read something more interesting than this. But, I think this'll be my favorite poem for a really long time. :)

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanks sir for your kind suggestion and I will try to write another one related to this guy okk and thanks for your kind words .(( Smiles)) 😊😊😊😊

[V.J.]

You're welcome. I think this poem is full of potential story wise. Perhaps it's the screenwriter in me, but I start picturing the multiple scenes you're describing in this short smart poem. It's very interesting and very exciting. Just the simple "and always helps me, without my permission" is so full of potential and multiple interpretations. :)

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thank you so much sir 😄😄😄