Twinkling stars ❄

Stars twinkle with a great joy .

They give us the knowledge of love.

Anybody of our FRIENDS could be leaving our hand at any time.

But it is the stars who will never leave our hand ever in our life time .

They also teach us how to live the life with a joy.

So try to live your life as the stars live.

Try to give happiness to others and enjoy your life by twinkling in the hearts of others.

Author's Note

Pls read it and share your opinions with me 😊

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I agree, that there are parts of nature that we can always depend on, like the sun coming up or the stars coming out at night. Humans are not always good at being faithful, but there are aspects of life that we can count on. For some that could be God, or whatever you put your faith in. Stars are a good metaphor for whatever each person looks up to for encouragement (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx mam for visiting my page and also thanks for understanding my feelings((( smiles))) 😊😊😊😊

[Alina]

I do like your thought upon stars and about their impact in our lives.
Here's a few suggestions I'd like to give :-
1. "Starts" are plural in number so it shall be "Stars twinkle" not "Stars twinkles" at the first line.
2. Again as they're plural/infinity in number so it shall be "They give us" instead of "It gives us" at the second line.
3. At the third line, "Anybody of our FRIENDS could be leaving our hand at any time"
4. "They also teach us" instead of "it also teaches us" at the fifth line.
5. "the stars" at the sixth line.
You've thought about stars in a mesmerising way. Keep writing :)
- Alina

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx alina for visiting my page and also thanks for ur kind suggestions . (Smiles) 😊😊😊😊😊

[Alina]

You're mostly welcome...shine not like a star but brighter than that! :)

[Taniska 😊😊]

Thanx mam ((((smiles))))😊😊😊😊😊😊 ,so kind of u