Rescue

A Haiku

 

Like a young lover,

spring flees from the cold winter,

into summer’s arms.

Reviews

[jen -- JG]

A great little Haiku here - I love this.
The image of a young lover running from a cold old lover into the warm arms of a summer love is entrancing.

Oh, that's right it is about the weather!
I love it

Good write

jen-JG

[The Viking]

Beautiful little haiku. Reminds me of the first poem I ever wrote which was a haiku about autumn I wrote in fourth grade. Anyways, this flows well from stanza to stanza and paints a bright picture of springtime. I love poems about the seasons.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmm, a beautiful haiku. Wonderful job!!!

Heather

[Wolfwind Words]

A young spring flees from the like arms of cold winter into summer!

I love it! You have captured such a beautiful moment in the seasonal change of time.
Great Craftsmenship!

[None]

This Haiku is for the books! So lovely and perfectly written in the true Haiku fashion. The Haiku police will not be after you! lol. You must get this published, it's a gorgeous story in itself. I'm saving to favorites!

[Nicholas Hallows]

Very nice! I love the metaphor and personification of spring fleeing from winter into summer's arms. It evokes great images in my head. A very good haiku! NH