Kaleidoscope

A Tanka poem

 

My mind is like a

kaleidoscope, and my thoughts

each have a colour;

as long as they keep tumbling,

I’m free from the grey of doubt.

Reviews

[None]

What a wonderful mind you have been blessed with! From way over here I can see those brilliant multicolor chips shaping and forming your precious thoughts. To say you are "bright" would be an understatement. Keep those special thoughts tumbling, my technicolor friend!! Your poem is full of energy and emotion!
Love it! A gorgeous Tanka!!

[NCPanthersgurl]

What wonderful imagery! I'd have never thought to compare the mind to a kaleidoscope! I can actually visualize my mind in multicolor, haha. Nice job!

[Y.F.]

Very playful :)
I liked the concept, and you colors you used suit and emphasize the piece so well!
Great job.

[Wolfwind Words]

That was an awsome visual display of word craftsmenship!
Very enjoyable!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This tanka is fabulous and the font color is a great addition. Great work!!!

Heather