These Tears

These Tears

A Poem by Tania Leigh
"

My first Senryu for a contest....

"

 

These tears in my eyes

are all for you, my sweet love.

Take them and be gone.

© 2008 Tania Leigh


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Beautiful. Your writing reminds me of water for some reason, I don't know if it's the font you use, the words, style, probably a combination of them all, but in a way it reminds me of sparkling streams of water. A very powerful image. This is pretty, I look forward to writing more.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Simply beautiful! :) Like a precious vile of tears that the knight rides off with to keep him safe on his journey!
Great Write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this...

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

As beautiful as it is simple. So much a emotion in such few words. You can feel what is going on - the tears are forced from the person, almost squeezed out, and then thrown at the one who caused them. It is delicious in its tragedy. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A what?lol This is very powerful and poetic...A wonderful, thoughtful read.


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Felt this too many times before.. Excellent poem as it invoked the emotions bitterly..

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful. Your writing reminds me of water for some reason, I don't know if it's the font you use, the words, style, probably a combination of them all, but in a way it reminds me of sparkling streams of water. A very powerful image. This is pretty, I look forward to writing more.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Know exactly how this feels Tania. Exactly. Such a poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

nice work tania ,sweet and simple ,right to the heart

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tender and heart rending .....

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great senryu, truly enjoyed this. Simple and full of emotion in three little lines.

Great Write

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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4/7/08 When my "Phobia" contest is completed April 18th, and winners have been chosen and notified, I'll be leaving the cafe indefinitely to focus on my family, as well as my first book and website. .. more..

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