These Tears

These Tears

A Poem by Tania Leigh
"

My first Senryu for a contest....

"

 

These tears in my eyes

are all for you, my sweet love.

Take them and be gone.

© 2008 Tania Leigh


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Beautiful. Your writing reminds me of water for some reason, I don't know if it's the font you use, the words, style, probably a combination of them all, but in a way it reminds me of sparkling streams of water. A very powerful image. This is pretty, I look forward to writing more.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

Just in these 3 lines I get a sense of a long string of emotions. Anger at one for hurting you because you love them?

Very Good job. :]

Posted 16 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
pal
my god..
tears all for u.. take and go away??

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful, short and sweet, Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a beautiful, touching piece and then adding the fact that it's haiku format just makes it splendid for me, personally. It's such a hard thing to get across everything you want to say in such short verse. Great great job and thank you for submitting to the True Talent contest.

-Sparrow

Posted 16 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
ah
this is really really great, you were able to write a flawless writing here

Posted 16 Years Ago


So short yet so beautiful. It always amazes me at how so few words can portray so many thoughts and emotions. As always wonderful write.


Brette

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My dear friend, you educate me in some many ways - if it hadn't been for you I wouldn't know what's a Senryu. In my humble opinion this poem is perfection. You portray a world of meaning in just three short lines. Amazing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YES!!!!!!!! Send that a*****e on his way and cry not another tear...... he's not worth it. BOOOOOYA!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Damn it girl you can write - but we already knew that. For a first Senryu it is perfect -- for any Senryu it is perfect. For a small poem that tells a complete story it is perfect.

Congratulations Tania this is perfect

Well done!!!!

jen-JG




Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. Brushing him away as you brush away your tears. It's short but has strength in it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1457 Views
51 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on March 11, 2008
Last Updated on March 11, 2008

Author

Tania Leigh
Tania Leigh

NH



About
4/7/08 When my "Phobia" contest is completed April 18th, and winners have been chosen and notified, I'll be leaving the cafe indefinitely to focus on my family, as well as my first book and website. .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..