Fall Into Gray

Fall Into Gray

A Poem by Tania Leigh

 

My heart is made of ruby red glass and adorned by sapphire scars. I keep it safely locked in its crystal case upon a pedestal of cascading colours; it is the only brilliance within a vast gray sea of emotions…

 

Then along comes your love; a tiny steel hammer, forged of hurt and anger and swung by pride as I watch helplessly…

 

I am ruefully in awe of the irony in the beautiful tinkling sound that I

hear when the crystal case is conquered and tiny shards of ruby red glass

explode ...and fall into gray.

© 2008 Tania Leigh


Author's Note

Tania Leigh
A challenge by my good friend Nuala Molloy Moran to use the word "pedestal"

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A nice piece, reminded me of beauty and the beast where the rose is in the glass case slowly loosing it's petals. A wonderful write!


Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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Then along comes your love....ahhh, what a line...I know that gray very well..outstanding

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I think that you used the word "pedestal" very well. What a swirling cacophony of emotions and elegantly chosen words! Great write!

Peace and love,
Gabe


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

well done :)
Sandra

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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4/7/08 When my "Phobia" contest is completed April 18th, and winners have been chosen and notified, I'll be leaving the cafe indefinitely to focus on my family, as well as my first book and website. .. more..

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