Abandon

 

Luminous light adorns the horizon as Dawn  

lends her warmth to the storm-ravaged sea.

 

Tempestuous waves of the fore-night, now tame,

roll their way to the shore, then in silence recede.

 

I stand alone with bare feet in the sand and seek

comfort from the cold ocean water’s caress.

 

By turns, my troubles I cast to the surf and then

pray that this time they, too, will regress.

 

The salt of my skin meets the cool ocean spray;

they unite as warm tears stream down my face.

 

I walk away quickly, leaving behind sorrow and

my memories for the sea to erase.

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A wonderful image you paint, my fav lines are -

I stand alone with bare feet in the sand and seek
comfort from the cold ocean water's careses

Wonderful!!!

[Legion]

:( So much sadness. A sea of tears. Woefully wonderful.

[Amor-de-angel]

By turns, my troubles I cast to the surf and then
pray that this time they, too, will regress.

Lovely work,sadness that results in a little positivity

[Cynthia Yildirim]

Oh my this is so beautiful Tania. Your style is very open and pure.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmm, wonderful write, Tania. I love this. Awesome job!!!

Heather