Vampiress

 

Lock yourself in and bring me the key.

There’s no world for you outside of that door.

Welcome to darkness, a life you have seen

only in nightmares (you’ve been here before).

 

Bring to me now what you know I need.

Satiate my hunger, allow me to feed.

You know how I like to watch you bleed,

and it amuses me to hear you plead.

 

I can’t feel pity, so don’t complain.

Extend me your neck, Love, surrender a vein.

Surrender your body, your soul, and your seed

for a new generation of darkness and greed.

 

What do I have for you in return?

Nothing.

Everything you must earn.

Obedience and loyalty may earn my trust, but

deny me or defy me and I’ll turn you to dust

 

It’s not a bad life if you learn to behave.

Accept that I’m Master and you are my slave.

Until I tire of you and set you free, it’s

under my command that you will be.

 

Come now, my timid subservient lover

Don’t be afraid, you’ve no need for cover

You will not feel pain, in that you can trust

You’ve already satisfied well my bloodlust

 

It’s your body I want now, for sins of the flesh

Lay me down here and let our bare bodies mesh

No pain, only pleasure as we become one

In my quest for the treasure, a dark prince….a son

 

Reviews

[None]

This is a real masterpiece. Every word is carefully chosen--you use no worn out phrases--it's all fresh and flows nicely together. Your story unfolds so nicely, even though the content speaks evil. You really are the Queen of Macabre and have a special touch with the dark stuff. You stand out as a writer who can deliver dark with a classy touch.

This is very good! I love the fifth stanza! What a great poem! Your words are very powerful. Very good!

[Mysteral - Night Prowle..]

This is good. Not "horror" dark, but I thought quite light hearted dark. Just a question, did you intend the rhyming format of the first two verses to be different from the rest? I do love poetry that rhymes.

[DeAn]

wow. makes me wanna grab a stake and enter you.

yet errie as it seems, I am intrigued to hear more.

almost hypnotized by it all.

very nice master. very nice. er uh
nice job. :)


l8r g8r
-Tao

[Lillian]

brilliance. sheer brilliance. this is great. just. wow. haha great job!

[Wolfwind Words]

Well worded and images beautifully painted onto a canvas, that we know will soon be stained by blood.
Great Job!

[Tara Jean Olson]

the concluding stanza, made for the entire poem!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmmm....love, love, love this poem. Going in my favorites. :) Fantastic piece!!!

Heather