Mask

We all have one...

Should the mask I wear ever
fall to the ground, revealing
 the secrets behind it; please
 leave it be and pretend
you didn’t see, for I’ll
be coming ‘round
to find it.

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Oh...I liked this piece...what a wonderful insite. I will pretent if I see it:)

[Snow White Queen]

Good write. Short but insiteful.

[Mark Pearce]

I like it when an artist feels free enough to limit their words -- paring the message to its essense. I see too many who find it necessary to pad their works. One great thought is a virtue.

[John Parker]

Such power packed words in this write......behind the mask is that who we really are or is the mask truly who we are? In a world that looks upon outside more than they do inside I guess that is the real question......or maybe that is what the world just sees the mask on the outside......

[ForgetMeTomorrow]

oh woww, this is the best thing i've read all day! Its so short and simple, yet so powerful. Great job, once again!

[Laughing Lunatic]

Powerful message in only a few words! Amazing write! =)

[jen -- JG]

Delightful, interesting and intriguing. We all do have a such a mask, please don't lose yours. i love the way your lines decrease in size yet keep the flow of your thoughts. Very clever.

[Franzia]

this was hot.. i LOVE this!!!!

[Floating on the feather..]

OMG !!
This is so so so amazing.
Couple of world, and the truth of life is revealed.

Great job.
Shinjini

[Gary H]

I like the way this sounds so simple yet in fact there is more than meets the eye - that mask can contain evil, can contain joy, can contain love and is always mysterious as no-one can ever be sure of it's contents.
Nicely written.

[Rhiannon Dragonraine]

Awesome! I love the simple eloquent plea to this one. I think it speaks the thoughts of many in today's society; especially those who don't own their own truth. a wonderful look into the human pysche.